In Bernices 's creative writing class...I was assigned write a telephone conversation . This is what I have in mind and started writing..
Recall a conversation and write about 2-3 pages on it.
© IVAN WONG
4th October 2006
A 8 year old boy tries to order a pizza for the first time. He talks to the pizza operator but he doesn’t understand what the pizza operator tries to say.
Boy : Hello
Pizza Guy : Thanks for calling Pizza Hut, Can I have your name please ?
Boy : My name, my name is Ah Loong
Pizza Guy : Can I have your address please ?
Boy : My address is No : 1 ,Jalan Ketat, 47810 , Petaling Jaya,
Pizza Guy : Where is this place ?
Boy : Its in Sunway Damansara, the yellow house after the guard house.
Pizza Guy : Is this your house phone ?
Boy : Yes 03-78035698
Pizza Guy : So can I have your order please ?
Boy : I see see this paper in the newspaper and I saw this yummy satay pizza.
Pizza Guy : I’m sorry this satay pizza package is over already .
Boy : What things do you have which is nice to eat ?
Pizza Guy : Well we have our “Hawaiian Supreme Pizza” offer now only for RM 19.90
Boy : Wait I ask my father something first ( puts the phone on hold )
Boys asked dad what is Hawaiian Supreme Pizza. And dad wasn’t sure what “Hawaiian Supreme Pizza” was.
Boy : Sorry my daddy also don’t know what is the “Hawaiian Supreme Pizza”, can you tell me more about that pizza ?
Pizza Guy : Oh “Hawaiian Supreme Pizza” is made out of the fine thin crust filled with cheese with pineapple and slices of beef is added on top.
Boy : Okay Okay I think I want that one cause got cheese and I like cheese.
Pizza Guy : Are you sure ?
Boy : Yes !
Pizza Guy : Any side orders like chicken wings or would you add on an additional Pepsi for only RM 1.99 ?
Boy : I don’t understand , is the Pepsi free ?
Pizza Guy : (annoyed ) NO ,ITS RM1.99 IF YOU ARE WILLING TO ADD ON !
Boy : Oh that means I buy the pizza and I get a free Pepsi ?
Pizza Guy : No not that !
Boy : I don’t understand can you please explain again ?
Pizza Guy : If you get the “Hawaiian Supreme Pizza” package its only RM 19.90 and you can get a special offer on the Pepsi for only RM 1.99 that means total is RM 20.80 with 5 % government tax.
Boy : What is government tax ? Why government have to tax me to buy the pizza ?
Pizza Guy : (really frustrated ) How old are you ?
Boy : Har ? How am I ? I’m Fine.
Pizza Guy : Let me confirm your order . You have ordered a “Hawaiian Supreme Pizza” package with a bottle of 1.5 liters of Pepsi that makes it RM 20.80 with 5 % of government tax and RM 2 for delivery charges . So in total its RM 22.80. We will provide the change for RM50.
Boy : Ok. Come faster I want to eat my pizza already.
Pizza Guy : Pizza Hut Delivery will deliver the pizza right to your door stop before 30 minutes, if not you will receive a free pizza from out outlet.
Boy : Okay you promise me 30 Minutes ok ? Wait I will take my watch and count first, I start counting now ok ?
Pizza Guy : Thanks for calling Pizza Hut , hope you enjoy your Pizza
Boys then ran to his room and take his stop watch and starts to count until the Pizza Delivery Man arrives.
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Recall a conversation and write about 2-3 pages on it.
© IVAN WONG
4th October 2006
A 8 year old boy tries to order a pizza for the first time. He talks to the pizza operator but he doesn’t understand what the pizza operator tries to say.
Boy : Hello
Pizza Guy : Thanks for calling Pizza Hut, Can I have your name please ?
Boy : My name, my name is Ah Loong
Pizza Guy : Can I have your address please ?
Boy : My address is No : 1 ,Jalan Ketat, 47810 , Petaling Jaya,
Pizza Guy : Where is this place ?
Boy : Its in Sunway Damansara, the yellow house after the guard house.
Pizza Guy : Is this your house phone ?
Boy : Yes 03-78035698
Pizza Guy : So can I have your order please ?
Boy : I see see this paper in the newspaper and I saw this yummy satay pizza.
Pizza Guy : I’m sorry this satay pizza package is over already .
Boy : What things do you have which is nice to eat ?
Pizza Guy : Well we have our “Hawaiian Supreme Pizza” offer now only for RM 19.90
Boy : Wait I ask my father something first ( puts the phone on hold )
Boys asked dad what is Hawaiian Supreme Pizza. And dad wasn’t sure what “Hawaiian Supreme Pizza” was.
Boy : Sorry my daddy also don’t know what is the “Hawaiian Supreme Pizza”, can you tell me more about that pizza ?
Pizza Guy : Oh “Hawaiian Supreme Pizza” is made out of the fine thin crust filled with cheese with pineapple and slices of beef is added on top.
Boy : Okay Okay I think I want that one cause got cheese and I like cheese.
Pizza Guy : Are you sure ?
Boy : Yes !
Pizza Guy : Any side orders like chicken wings or would you add on an additional Pepsi for only RM 1.99 ?
Boy : I don’t understand , is the Pepsi free ?
Pizza Guy : (annoyed ) NO ,ITS RM1.99 IF YOU ARE WILLING TO ADD ON !
Boy : Oh that means I buy the pizza and I get a free Pepsi ?
Pizza Guy : No not that !
Boy : I don’t understand can you please explain again ?
Pizza Guy : If you get the “Hawaiian Supreme Pizza” package its only RM 19.90 and you can get a special offer on the Pepsi for only RM 1.99 that means total is RM 20.80 with 5 % government tax.
Boy : What is government tax ? Why government have to tax me to buy the pizza ?
Pizza Guy : (really frustrated ) How old are you ?
Boy : Har ? How am I ? I’m Fine.
Pizza Guy : Let me confirm your order . You have ordered a “Hawaiian Supreme Pizza” package with a bottle of 1.5 liters of Pepsi that makes it RM 20.80 with 5 % of government tax and RM 2 for delivery charges . So in total its RM 22.80. We will provide the change for RM50.
Boy : Ok. Come faster I want to eat my pizza already.
Pizza Guy : Pizza Hut Delivery will deliver the pizza right to your door stop before 30 minutes, if not you will receive a free pizza from out outlet.
Boy : Okay you promise me 30 Minutes ok ? Wait I will take my watch and count first, I start counting now ok ?
Pizza Guy : Thanks for calling Pizza Hut , hope you enjoy your Pizza
Boys then ran to his room and take his stop watch and starts to count until the Pizza Delivery Man arrives.
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